[Poetry] Delicious

He tasted like sweet lemonade on a scorching summer day.
She was expensive champagne on a candlelit night.
He tasted like decadent chocolate that took my breath away.
She was caviar that stunned me with just one bite.

© Jade M. Wong 2016

Written for Day 17 – Savory and Day 18 – Senseless of OctPoWriMo

24 thoughts on “[Poetry] Delicious

  1. Love this comparison of people (the couple) to food. Using the the scents of taste and smell. I thought all the lines were great but caviar makes me ill. I had it accidentally once in mushroom caps and threw up
    But I recognize how expensive and fine it is as a food so it well defines how “stunning she is with just one bite”

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