[Poetry] Heavy

The weight of your world
On my shoulders
Placed there with good intentions
And tough love,
The weight of your hopes
And dreams
Bending my back
Eternally,

But as I grew up
I shed you
A piece of a dream
At a time,
Until shoulders light
And back straight
The only life I live
Is my own.

Β© Jade M. Wong


My first dVerse poem of the new year! Lillian hosts today and asks us to write a poem using the word “shed”.Β 

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49 thoughts on “[Poetry] Heavy

  1. this reminded me of one of our conversations over dinner one night about parental expectations especially Asian parents, well articulated Jade, carrying those burdens seem like a duty but when shed it can allow us to soar even higher – you articulate beautifully

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  2. A beautiful first dVerse poem of the new year, Jade. I felt the weight lifting from my shoulders as I read. I love the gradually shedding, β€˜A piece of a dream / At a time’ and the release and freedom of light shoulders and a straight back.

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  3. Its indeed wonderful to finally live your dreams and make it happen…not the ones our elders expect us to be (well mostly common for most Asian families); not that its bad…but as a mother i believe we should allow our kids to grow on their own and discover the kind of dreams they will dream…

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  4. Expectations of others’, their dreams, their rules, their β€œguidance” can weigh an individual down. And then to shed those layers and be oneself. Back straight, freed from those burdensome expectations. Really good write to the prompt.

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    • Thank you Lillian! So glad you liked the poem πŸ™‚ It can be hard to view guidance in a negative way, especially if it comes from people we love, but it’s always good to remember to stay true to ourselves!

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