The stones of the archway were cool under her fingertips and the cobblestone pathway was unevenly potholed. The air itself smelled different here. A wet aroma of fish permeated from the market two streets over, blending with the rich spices and sharp ginger that infused the city.
A shove at her shoulder knocked her aside as an older woman barged past her. The woman glanced at her overstuffed knapsack and comfy sneakers. Foreigner, she probably thought.
She was a foreigner, not just to this country, but to this chapter of her life.
Taking a step forward, she began to write.
© Jade M. Wong
Written for Friday Fictioneers. Word Count: 100 exactly.
A little fiction to satisfy my wanderlust craving. One day, I will travel the world and see everything that’s out there. And yes world, you can hold me to that.
What a lovely piece! 😊
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Thank you! I appreciate the read & comment ^_^
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I loved this! I could see what you descibed so clearly in my head that it felt as if I were there. 😀
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Aw thanks George~ I’m happy to hear the descriptions conveyed nicely!
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You’re very welcome 😀
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you Katie! I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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So. For some reasons I missed this amazing piece of fiction. Reading this made me want a cup of freshly made ginger (I blame you Jade 😁) and I love the idea of being foreign to one’s new chapter.
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Aww no worries Ameena. Better late than never! And hands you cup of freshly made ginger 😉 I’m glad you liked the story and the many concepts of being a foreigner.
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Beautiful description here. I really loved this!
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Aw thank you Amie! I’m happy to hear that 😀
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A glance into the mind of a young tourist taking in the sights and sounds of a foreign city. Good writing, Jade. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you very much Suzanne 🙂 Glad you liked the story!
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Great work… 🙂
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You’ve created a great sense of the excitement and adventure that comes with the new. I’m excited for her, well done
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Thanks Michael! Happy to have you visit 🙂
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I too am a foreigner to a new chapter in my life. Thank you for giving me the words to describe it. Beautifully done!
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You’re very welcome, thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment 🙂
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