You were fire,
Your flames lashing out,
Reveling in the shrieks and shouts.
I was darkness,
A pulsing black hole,
Feeding on the flickers of my soul.
They say fire
Burns brightest in the dark,
And together, we burned until we left no mark.
© Jade M. Wong
Written for dVerse‘s prompt of fire.
[…] via [Poetry] Burn — Jade M.Wong […]
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Jade, those were beautiful words.
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Beautiful and inspiring. Love it!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Truly an amazing piece!
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Thank you so much!
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Truly amazing and a fresh perspective, ☮️
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Thank you so much!
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Absolutely consuming!
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Thank you! 🙂
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P.S.
I wonder though you still dont appear in my reader..so i have to navigate to your site everynow and then to check if you have new post.
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Whaaat. Ugh. I don’t know why that would be happening!!
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Beautiful verses Jade..and the life (?)…maybe meaning? essence? you gave to fire is amazing..
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Aww thank you michnavs!! I’m delighted that you enjoyed my poem. I hope you and your girls have a wonderful weekend 💜
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
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